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cherry manhattan by ~aircrash:iconaircrash:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Rhymes




solemn walks to a willful step.
buglary lies.
rush, shove, push
cackling truths to an uncertain degree.
a cold wash overcomes your face and you only see suffering tears.
yes, melancholy scribbles on a rabid floor. but dont try
to understand unless you're in a justified boat.
tick. tick. the ashtray of your life is getting more burnt.

scribble scramble. shadows are diagnosing your new stricken
fever. break your glasses but not your face.
let anonymous breathe.

lungs, die not of smoking but your own, nicotine.
fallen roses and shelled cliches.
DIseasE and die.

(shatter this.)
©2002-2009 ~aircrash
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i know its like oof.

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!sigmax Sep 27, 2002, 7:26:37 PM
That is fucking amazing.

Rarely do I read poetry on DA...I usually look at 1 poem out of 12 devs or so.

Even more rarely do I find poetry that I honestly love.

This is fucking amazing, it has rhythm, it conveys the sense of something without spelling it out, it gives you more feeling and less imagery.

Savage +fav.

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~robotmafia Sep 27, 2002, 10:24:20 PM
You are my new favorite writer, as my other has lost her nerves and you are elegant.
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!gustoboy Sep 28, 2002, 7:21:25 AM
oof.

(as in "i have just been hit by a 50 pound bag of fertilizer swinging from a rope")

i love it, babe.

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`inennui Nov 4, 2002, 1:24:56 PM
Speedy choo choo?

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!jesusbite Dec 30, 2002, 6:48:40 PM
I dont get it. At all.
Its smooth as fresh glass though.
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~spud Jan 1, 2003, 10:01:31 AM
wonderful. i love it ^_^ great work!

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~linked Mar 22, 2003, 7:40:52 PM
O_o is all I have to say cause it went over my head or some how bypassed it.
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~cutiefox Sep 25, 2006, 4:31:55 PM
:D Nice poem!! I like it very much! ^_^

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