beautifully minimalistic. the andes and the timely references at the start broadens the imagery right away, and then you close it up like a flash in the following stanzas. really pretty.
wow - i really like the blending of the image and the words. makes me think of how care-free we all were as children, having this expansive imagination and then having it sort of crash down around us later.
beautiful presentation... its hit me just right.
Is the effaced female on the bottom left a mother figure?
where strong indicates lovelyness